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**This page has been designed for students to post the rough drafts of their work which will be reviewed and commented on by parents, peers, and teachers.

This particular page is devoted to the assignment given in November about Giving Thanks for the people, things, and opportunities that we have.

Please follow the instructions below for commenting on files.

Consider this student sample.**

1. How could the writing process be applied to this work to improve its quality? 2. What suggestions could you make to this writer to help them improve their writing? 3. After downloading and reading the file, use microsoft comments to make suggestions to the work and repost to this wiki page. Submit the file as Giving Thanks - Comments by (your first name).

[|Giving Thanks.doc]

[|Giving Thanks - comments by Jenny.doc]